feedback

In tutorial today we recieved feedback on our projects, i think the feedback i recieved was fair and am going to do a re-shoot of my advert as it will take such a short time to correct. Things that need to be done differently are:

- In my proposal i said that i wanted a clean white flat background, however in my filming i used a black curtain background, i needed to stick to what i had said in my proposal and seing examples of where a white background had been used i agree that it would have hugely improved my work.

- The text right at the beginning was too fast for the audience to read, and needed to be on the screen for at least three and a half seconds, even though i only had 20 seconds, it is a vital part of the message i was trying to get accross, in order to correct this a suggestion that was made was to start the actors line while the text was being shown to allow the text to be up for longer.

- The cuts to Isabellas hands and eyes were not needed instead a long shot, mid-shot, close up shot could have been used and would have also added to the intensity of the piece.

- The main issue would be that i needed to spend more time on the design process then all these problems would have been adressed earlier next time i need to allow space for test runs so that the final outcome is what i wanted.